Invisible Cities: Fedora


One of the cities and desire, Fedora was the city that I defiantly had the most trouble designing and composing. This is because of its limited description of the outer concept of the city and the overly long description of the other, personal cities within the glass balls. I did manage to compose a city that I'm satisfied with, concentrating specifically on the dark, grim city rather then the personal cities as I felt it was more important.

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