This is my first script for my Fantastic Voyage project on Evolution and Variation. I have tried to keep the script short and the story to the point in hopes of bulking up what I have here, rather than trying to shorten down a bigger story like what occurred in Script to Screen. I have tried to base my story in the same style as games like Animal Crossing or Pokemon Mystery Dungeon in terms of layout, so sections in the script for GAMEPLAY will mean that the style of the story will shift more to a gaming style, compared to a CUT SCENE, that will play out more in the style of a traditional animated story. This is because I want my project to lean more on Lets Play videos on Youtube, so the style of the story I want to take inspiration from Story based games like Animal Crossing, but still have a core story and plot to them. I feel the script might need some more tweaking, especially near the end, but I want some feedback first to see if the main story is okay while I start...

Before I started on my script I wanted to take on the design advice from my OGR in terms of the characters and the island, I aimed to make them in a more recognisable style, while still keeping the islands and the tortoises still simple yet individual enough so they can still be recognised in the animation. In terms of the direction of my story, I wanted to try and take this in the direction of story based games, ( like Animal Crossing or Pokemon Mystery Dungeon) so I was thinking about having the style of the story in a game format, while still having the tortoises evolution be told in a simple story that surrounds the game style. Im gonna aim to produce a few more thumbnails and a mood board back to back to my script so the project is still moving while I'm still formatting the style I want to tell it in.