Premise: Animatic Progress (Without Sound) and Story Update

Here is the progress I have been making while developing the animatic for my Premise project. I have been composing it together without sound because in the first couple of tests I knew that I still had a lot of progress and improvements I needed to make the story make more sense. I am planning on adding sound effects for the smaller sounds like the running and breathing portion of the animation because I want it emphasis the silence, as well as the loneliness that Drew feels in the story so I also don't plan on having a soundtrack at this pint in the story because I feel like it will take away from this aspects.