Premise: Storyboards











These are the storyboards that I have so far for my Premise project. At this point I know that I still need to do a lot of re-writing for the story as there are a lot of patchy areas that I feel need work, however I am happy with some of the ideas and camera shots I have in this first draft, as well as having the core concept and idea down so I can move forward onto progressing it.

Edit: Please Read Storyboards from Right to Left

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