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Hi Odette,
ReplyDeleteJust a quick point regarding using a 'quote within a quote'... you have Agutter talking about the skinny-dipping, but it comes from within an article written by Buxton. This is called 'secondary referencing' - in your in-text citation, you need to have both names and dates... see her under 'secondary referencing' -
https://www.uca.ac.uk/library/academic-support/harvard-referencing/
At the moment, it sounds as though Ms Buxton was the one doing the swimming...