Fantastic Voyage: Script 02 Edit


After some improvements to the dialogue and the jokes to the Finch character this is what my script is like and what I think I will be running with, until I receive my final feedback from Claire about the technical terms. I defiantly want the Finch to be an unlikable character and narrator in the animation, so I have tried to make his jokes mean spirited, while also staying in the 14-15 age bracket and blend them in with some of the teaching. I am going to make a rough storyboard for this just to lay out how the animation will play out and then compose my shots and music in a Pre-Viz to see how my models will play out.

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