Animatic With New Opening Animatic with No New Opening After spending some time away from my project, I finally decided to re-vist it with a fresh new outlook and to edit some of the issues I was having with it. I first decided to change the opening, which I felt didn't work very well within the original animatic, and I wanted something that highlighted the isolation as well as the light that plays a big part in the story. I also re-wrote and cut out sections in the middle, to try and shorten the animatic because I felt that it was dragging to long, and I could condense the story a bit more and still have the same effect. Unformatuntly, despite me doing this, I don't seem to have made any time difference, despite taking out and editing a large portion of the middle of the story, so I am going to have to be a bit more brutal and get some advice for what to do next, as the story is still too long. However, of the two versions I have uploaded here, the first on...
Hey! Your drawings are looking really cool! Love the way you've explored it!
ReplyDeleteOGR 01/11/2018
ReplyDeleteHey Odette - real shame your Scribd document isn't viewable on your blog here? It's a nicely put together document! My feedback is simple and to the point. I think you've created some really nice thumbnails and it makes total sense that the 'Opera house' should be at the centre of your city. I think you just need to move onto creating some more loose, more speedy DIGITAL concept art now as you start to consider envisioning your digital set shot. I think you get this place and you should move on to the next stage and have some fun... but I would like to see you working in colour FIRST and working digitally too :)