For this set of thumbnails I decided to look at the redesigns for the Opera, as I didn't like the ones that I had originally composed in my first OGR. I decided to concentrate on structure, as well as the door design, but unlike the buildings, I had an idea of what door I liked, but I wanted it to look instead at a design that could appear to make the building more professional. Looking at the buildings in comparison, I like how the Opera does contains sharp and smooth elements from the individual building, while also standing out on its own, but like the others I will alter a few things from this design before constructing my final designs. I want to concentrate on colour for this building, along with the rest to try and continue the continuity between them.
Hey! Your drawings are looking really cool! Love the way you've explored it!
ReplyDeleteOGR 01/11/2018
ReplyDeleteHey Odette - real shame your Scribd document isn't viewable on your blog here? It's a nicely put together document! My feedback is simple and to the point. I think you've created some really nice thumbnails and it makes total sense that the 'Opera house' should be at the centre of your city. I think you just need to move onto creating some more loose, more speedy DIGITAL concept art now as you start to consider envisioning your digital set shot. I think you get this place and you should move on to the next stage and have some fun... but I would like to see you working in colour FIRST and working digitally too :)