OGR What If Metropolis?
Wassily Kandinsky PPT by Odette on Scribd
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Hey! Your drawings are looking really cool! Love the way you've explored it!
ReplyDeleteOGR 01/11/2018
ReplyDeleteHey Odette - real shame your Scribd document isn't viewable on your blog here? It's a nicely put together document! My feedback is simple and to the point. I think you've created some really nice thumbnails and it makes total sense that the 'Opera house' should be at the centre of your city. I think you just need to move onto creating some more loose, more speedy DIGITAL concept art now as you start to consider envisioning your digital set shot. I think you get this place and you should move on to the next stage and have some fun... but I would like to see you working in colour FIRST and working digitally too :)