After a conversation and some more thought I have finally managed to narrow down the mind maps into two story ideas that I think I can work with. I'm happy that I managed to draw away from the setting being in a prison that I felt made the idea feel generic and easy, whereas with these ideas I feel I can manipulate the layout or the tone to see how it effects the final piece, although I still have a way to go with characters, conflict, story layout and ending. Feedback is still appreciated.
'The suburban also fails to mention any relation towards the outside world, containing the viewer within it, and making the town feel like a world with in itself, so with no outside comparison the viewer must accept what they are presented as real.'... An interesting read, Odette! :)
ReplyDeleteJust be careful of your spellings - you have a 'tern' (seagull?) in there instead of 'turn', and a 'galmsot', which I am not sure what it is supposed to be! ;)