Animatic With New Opening Animatic with No New Opening After spending some time away from my project, I finally decided to re-vist it with a fresh new outlook and to edit some of the issues I was having with it. I first decided to change the opening, which I felt didn't work very well within the original animatic, and I wanted something that highlighted the isolation as well as the light that plays a big part in the story. I also re-wrote and cut out sections in the middle, to try and shorten the animatic because I felt that it was dragging to long, and I could condense the story a bit more and still have the same effect. Unformatuntly, despite me doing this, I don't seem to have made any time difference, despite taking out and editing a large portion of the middle of the story, so I am going to have to be a bit more brutal and get some advice for what to do next, as the story is still too long. However, of the two versions I have uploaded here, the first on...
'The suburban also fails to mention any relation towards the outside world, containing the viewer within it, and making the town feel like a world with in itself, so with no outside comparison the viewer must accept what they are presented as real.'... An interesting read, Odette! :)
ReplyDeleteJust be careful of your spellings - you have a 'tern' (seagull?) in there instead of 'turn', and a 'galmsot', which I am not sure what it is supposed to be! ;)