After a conversation and some more thought I have finally managed to narrow down the mind maps into two story ideas that I think I can work with. I'm happy that I managed to draw away from the setting being in a prison that I felt made the idea feel generic and easy, whereas with these ideas I feel I can manipulate the layout or the tone to see how it effects the final piece, although I still have a way to go with characters, conflict, story layout and ending. Feedback is still appreciated.

I took on board some feedback from my last mind map and tried to broaden out with some more ideas to see how the story could go, I'm still not certain how the story will go, but I have a couple that i could develop, but feedback would appreciated so I could get an idea of what ideas work.